Hey everyone...I am still under the weather, okay, sick as a dog...but I wanted to get this done. I hope I fixed all of the errors that my true blue pointed out, but if not, well this is a work in progress.
Like always tell us what you think.
“Owens Mom called?”
Grace could tell by Harper’s tone she was trying to make conversation as
they made their way to the car.
“No. Lucky said that
so Owen would have an excuse to take you home.
He was trying to give O some alone time with you.” Grace didn’t see any point in lying about it.
“Oh.” Harper cast her
eyes to Graces over the hood of the car and asked, “ So? What did you think of
Lucky?”
Grace shrugged. “He’s
cute.” She wanted to say so much
more. Launch into how it had felt as he
held her hand in the mall and tell Harper about these rampant feelings she was
having. She wanted Harper’s opinion in
the worst way. But their relationship’s
been subtly shifting for the past two days.
God, had it only been two days?
Instead, she did something she had never done before. She shut Harper out and changed the subject.
“I have a few things I need to do before I meet Truman tonight. You want me to drop you off, or do you want
to come with?”
Her heart was beating double time, and it physically hurt
that they couldn’t talk like they used to.
But Harper hadn’t been straight with her since the night of the band
party, and right at that moment she wasn’t feeling all warm and fuzzy either.
Getting a little miffed, Harper asked, “Are you pissed off because
I didn’t go with Owen?”
Again, deciding honesty was the best policy Grace said, “You
bet I’m pissed, but it’s got nothing to do with Owen and everything to do with
what happened at lunch.”
Harper froze. The old
Harp would have demanded to know what Grace was talking about. She would have gone toe to toe with Grace even
if she thought she was wrong. But this new and damaged version of Harper
went stone still. Like, if she didn’t
move, Grace would forget about whatever it was that had pissed her off to begin
with.
Whipping the car into the parking lot on the back side of
the mall, Grace decided it was time to have it out. Turning to her best friend of more years than
she could count, she wanted to let loose with both barrels but was stopped
short by the anguish in Harper's eyes.
Just that fast, her anger evaporated.
This was her best friend. Maybe
it wasn’t Harper who needed a reminder of what that meant, and wasn’t that a
sobering thought. Leaning down, she laid
her head against the steering wheel while keeping Harper firmly in sight.
In a voice better suited to a skittish animal, Grace said, “I
get that you don’t need me to slay your dragons, or even want me to. I do.
But Harps, I know something is wrong, and I know something happened. And
while I can’t promise not to go all ape shit when you finally tell me, it’s
killing me that you won’t. I have never
lied to you. Ever. But suddenly you’re evading my questions and
turning everything around. Plus, you’re
clearly uncomfortable around me all of a sudden. I get that I fucked up today at lunch, but
that was an accident. I swear to God, I
would never intentionally hurt you like that.
And on top of all that, I finally figured out Owen is the guy you’ve been
all moony over for the past couple of weeks.
He’s a drummer, and that curly hair, I don’t know why I didn’t put it
together right away yesterday. Hell, I
don’t even feel right telling you about my plans with Truman tonight because
every time someone mentions the word ‘party’ or ‘go out’ you go all statue.”
And just like that Harper demonstrated by bowing up. Her eyes started to tear and she anxiously
looked around as if trying to find a way out.
In true Harper fashion, her face got redder and she gasped for air. Frantically, pulling the door
handle release, she burst from the car running toward the rear where she proceeded to lose her lunch.
Moving like a shot, Grace jumped from the car as the panic climbed and clutched at her throat.
Once done, Harper swiped her hand across her mouth and leaned
against the car, before sliding to the ground in a soundless melt. Walking to her side and bending down, Grace
didn't know what to do. With the same
dogged determination that had seen her through everything else she slid to the
ground next to her friend.
“Harper.” She said
softly, patiently.
Clearing her throat and then having to clear it a second
time, Harper whispers, “Grace if I tell you…then it…that makes it…real.”
Touching Harper's hair, because in that moment she needed the
connection, she whispered back, “Harp, it’s real whether you tell me or
not. But telling someone, anyone, makes
it less scary because you don’t have to do this by yourself.”
A keening wail rose from her friend and she turned her head to look at Grace with eyes begging, for what Grace had no idea. Suddenly Harper is in Graces arms crying big
racking sobs, her body shaking with the force of her despair and heartache. In that moment Grace is consumed with pure
hatred for the person who could reduce her beautiful, gifted friend to
this.
Once the purging is complete, Harper sat up and leaned against the car. Turning and meeting
Graces stare she said, “I don’t think your right, about me feeling any
better. But you are right about me
keeping a secret. I just have one
question. If I tell you, will you keep
my secret too?”
Feeling only a little dishonest Grace crossed her legs, in
lieu of her fingers, and said “Harper, it’s you and me. Cradle to grave, remember. I got your back no matter what. Do you want to go back to my house and have
this talk?”
Harper looked around at the asphalt parking lot, taking in
the buzz of the passing traffic and sighs.
“This is as good a place as any, I guess.” Taking a deep breathe she turns and in
halting, static filled words, began her story.
Okay so you know the drill. Give me your honest opinion.
Okay so you know the drill. Give me your honest opinion.
4 comments:
Sorry you're still sick. Feel better soon, okay? *hugs*
But, boy, you sure can produce while you're not feeling well -- good stuff! Now go rest.
This was really great. At one point though -- And just like that Harper demonstrated -- you switched your POV.
I liked this story and of course the hook at the end wants me to keep reading. I so want to find out what happened to Harper. Great job.
"sliding to the ground in a soundless melt." lovely imagery.
and i agree with linda, what words you produce while under the weather. thanks for keeping us hooked, now get back to bed and rest up!
Wow,
Amazing
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